Mary-Sue Meme

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Ok then lets do... Mudmask...
 Demon And Mudmask JD by Esprit-Arait


[] They are possessed by an angel

[] They are possessed by a demon 
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong. 
[] They have a rare hair/fur color 
[] Their eyes are an unusual color 
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[] They are immortal 
[] (if a female) they have large boobs 
[] (if a male) they are very muscular 
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers 
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers 
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents (she kinda knew them but only for the first few weeks of her life)
[] They ran away from home 
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death 
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature ]
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really are. 
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit
[] They have a mental disorder 
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities 
[] They are very intelligent 
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit  
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts 
[] Some part of their body glows  
[] They have a rare/unusual name 
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[] They are connected with a certain element 
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga 
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something 
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (the bear that killed her parents kinda gives her a nervous breakdown but she still keeps a level head for everyone else's sake)
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly ( this happened alot when she had just joined the clan
[x] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of royals
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] They have a curse upon them 
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia


Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper 
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless

FINAL RESULT: 6

0-5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue
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