Critics needed for my future book!!!!

Yep Im writing a book. Ive had this one for quite some time and I even have a whole hierarchy. Ive been working on the story since before 2013 But Im just now starting to write it. Here is the first part of the prologue. Please comment on it I need to know If you guys want me to write more of it.
WIP prologue *into the stones*
prologue snippet *into the stones*   Nestled deep in a rocky valley tucked far away from the bustle of any city, sat a large cave carved from the limestone walls of the mountain on which it called its home. Within this den lay as small nearly white dragon, no older than 6 years of age. Her wings were striped with a translucent gold and the ridge on her back was a gradient of periwinkle and lavender. As she sleeps her sides rise and fall with each breath delicately glimmering in the late morning light. Each claw seems to twitch in an order known only know to her and her charcoal tipped horns shine brightly in a single beam of light.